Editorial Report 2

In this section, I allowed more pauses and more specific content to better get my point across to my viewers.

Selection from Rough Cut

• The F-35 is the U.S. military’s latest fighter jet
• Clips of it flying from youtube
• Fifth generation fighter
• Actual Definition goes here
• One plane that is suppose to replace the F-16, the A-10, the Harrier, and the F/A-18
• Photos of planes F-35 is replacing
• It uses a vast array of integrated systems to assess, defend, and attack.
• The pilot’s helmets essentially gives him a 360 degree view around the plane
• Pilot’s Helmet View
• The Marine variant can hover, make a short takeoff, and land vertically.
• Footage of plane hovering
• The naval version is designed for use on an aircraft carrier
• Footage of it taking off from a carrier
• The Air Force version has a 20 mm machine gun.

Selection from Re-edited Selections

the F35 is the U.S. military’s latest multi-role 5-th generation stealth fighter that is set to ensure the United States and Allies Air capabilities for the battlefield of the future.

//Clip of a walk around an F35

And futuristic this plane is… This plane is fast,

//F35 flying

its stealthy

//Lockheed’s stealth tech or its invisibility on the radar

it can hover,

// hover landing

it carries a deadly precise weapons payload

// weapons payload

And its advanced technically ensures its place among the fifth generation fighters of tomorrow

//overview of the F35 targeting helmet

This jet is set to replace F-16, the F/A-18, the AV-8B and the A-10 Warthog. All of which are more than 30 years old

SO I guess you can see why this plane has such a high price tag

But at a staggering 400 billion, this project is also the most expensive military project in history.

//view of top ten list of the most expensive military projects in history

1. How did the content change when you re-edit it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

 The content changed in that I did not go into specifics here about the 3 different versions of the F-35. The jet is pretty much the same and if I go into saying how it is different, I am going to contradict myself. Nonetheless, I do address these differences in a latter part of my argument.

2. How did the form change when re-edit? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

The edited version sort of pushes the F-35 and all its features in something that is visually appealing. Also, I switched to using more video clips than still images. The sort pauses in between that I have added also makes it easier for the statement that I said to sink in.